Haiku – Senryu
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beauty words still wet
fingers brush the keyboard searching
reciprocating
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hearts beating as one
reciprocating movement
lovers making love
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osculating
lips forever seeking bliss
invoking memory
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utopia yes
travelled space time seeking
pray it must exist
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gasping hearts in pain
trials tribulations why
souls searching truths
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nature had a plan
all life on earth procreate
propagating love
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ere you think me lost
time agrees I am that man
leaving a dream
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oh my God must stop
yet your genius drives me
opening voids once locked
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searched souls I’ve wandered
universes and beyond
there’s no place like home
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can I forget yes
my brain is losing
doctor say i’s fine
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a soul awakens
love flows through its veins
grizzly bears must wait
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Inspired by yassy66
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© Mick E Talbot 2017/66
Mick E Talbot Poems 
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Hi, can you let me know what’s this Senryu and how to write it?
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A senryu.
your quest for knowledge 5 or syllables
befitting of a scholar 7 syllables
enjoy the challenge 5 syllables
Same format as a haiku.
It will be easier for me, you too, if you follow the link:
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/forms/s
Pleased to be of help.
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Okay…thanks…will check the link soon…will try one soon…
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Wish you well.
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I find most of my haiku are actually sort of Senryu…a comical situation it is…
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Beautiful.. amd i’m in love with the choice of words.
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Each verse being a separate poem allows you to range quite widely. Nice one.
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Inspired, a haiku, senryu reply:
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many thanks Dave
it is hard to find the brake
once I have started
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my words flow
like my heart is leaking
divulging feelings
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for world survival
we must look deeper searching
oceans or the sky
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me I’ve travelled
many lands undiscovered
galaxies beyond
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spontaneous
composing poetry
anthologies
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Keen eye open for a pingback – Mick
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