Fog & Change
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fog obscures
change in sight perception
blurred vision
double take its lifted
natures beauty now revealed
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fog low cloud fallen
from hilltops can be viewed
cotton wool carpets
a golden eagle screaming
it wont find food today
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a change in nature
understand evolution
happens all the time
yet foggy days can happen
palaeontologist’s blinded
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foggy roads danger
drivers should change down a gear
slow pay attention
or risk your car your life
did you see that deer crossing
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please don’t change feel me
don’t let hate fog your brain
we know love can be
painful breaking up our life
cancer took our baby
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© Mick E Talbot 2017/66
Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Challenge #21 – “Fog & Change”
Wow, Mick! Your words always amaze me. I love the wide range of themes revolving around the prompt words! Well done. ❤
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Many thanks Colleen
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You are so welcome.
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Your welcome
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Link exchange is nothing else except it is only placing
the other person’s website link on your page at proper place and other person will also do
same for you.
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Hi Collen,
Thanks for the heads up. Have question: Jane Dougherty;s tanka inspired me to compose some more on your ‘Fog & Change’ challenge, if you don’t mind I would like to leave a pingback will that be okay? Thanks again,
Mik
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Amazing bunch of tanka, inspired!
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My gratitude expressed in a big THANK YOU.
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Ahhh.. 🙂
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