Posted on

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Challenge #21 – “Fog & Change”

Fog & Change

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
fog obscures
change in sight perception
blurred vision
double take its lifted
natures beauty now revealed
~~~~~~~~~
fog low cloud fallen
from hilltops can be viewed
cotton wool carpets
a golden eagle screaming
it wont find food today
~~~~~~~~~
a change in nature
understand evolution
happens all the time
yet foggy days can happen
palaeontologist’s blinded
~~~~~~~~~
foggy roads danger
drivers should change down a gear
slow pay attention
or risk your car your life
did you see that deer crossing
~~~~~~~~~
please don’t change feel me
don’t let hate fog your brain
we know love can be
painful breaking up our life
cancer took our baby
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
© Mick E Talbot 2017/66

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Challenge #21 – “Fog & Change”

10 thoughts on “Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Challenge #21 – “Fog & Change””

  2. Link exchange is nothing else except it is only placing
    the other person’s website link on your page at proper place and other person will also do
    same for you.

    Like

    Reply
  3. Pingback: Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Challenge # 22 – “Door & Friend” – Colleen Chesebro ~ Fairy Whisperer

    1. Hi Collen,
      Thanks for the heads up. Have question: Jane Dougherty;s tanka inspired me to compose some more on your ‘Fog & Change’ challenge, if you don’t mind I would like to leave a pingback will that be okay? Thanks again,
      Mik

      Like

      Reply

Leave a comment