Inspired Dodoitsu



made me feel lonely sad night
read loved and reread again
loneliness beat a shout heard
my wife not asleep
dusk setting sun goodbye day
dark clouds fly dappling moonlight
shadows dance to subtle base
natures orchestras

Inspired by yassy66
frantic gasps voice begging help
inadequate attendants
forlorn now long drawn-out breaths
stranded whale lays dead
bird cherries not yet in bloom
awaiting spring winter still holds
feed the birds keeps them happy
flu still prevailing
Top 2 Inspired by yassy66
© Mick E Talbot 2017/66


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