Inspired Dodoitsu

Dodoitsu

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made me feel lonely sad night
read loved and reread again
loneliness beat a shout heard
my wife not asleep
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dusk setting sun goodbye day
dark clouds fly dappling moonlight
shadows dance to subtle base
natures orchestras

Inspired by yassy66
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frantic gasps voice begging help
inadequate attendants
forlorn now long drawn-out breaths
stranded whale lays dead
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bird cherries not yet in bloom
awaiting spring winter still holds
feed the birds keeps them happy
flu still prevailing
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Top 2 Inspired by yassy66
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© Mick E Talbot 2017/66

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