Inspired Haiku – Senryu

A haiku senryu comment:

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i like to comment
i liked your poem too
inspirational
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caught me out again
unseen wonders daylight stars
dusk will switch them on
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take advantage
look to the skies darkened views
damm those clouds
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don’t let pain obscure
views of nature outside time
clocks ticking observe
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capture natures
inspired majesty
vibrancy exposed
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the unseen inside
terrors paranoia fits
you’ll win you will

© Mick E Talbot 2017/66

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