Eyes plus words

Not specifically inspired  by Jacob Ibrag, but with respect to him, his poetry, and his blog “Eyes + Words”, my onw inspiration on “Eyes Plus Words”


俳句・川柳
目プラスの言葉
によって
ニック ・ タルボット


words-2

eyes speak with much love
silent words blinked across rooms
unwriten love notes

be aware evil
eyes can also convey hate
heed turn not your back

if looks could kill
i have died many times
undeserved

eyes plus words daunting
eyes whisper yes…words deny
heed the words be safe

love talks bodily
blinded by touch no words
feelings of desire

take care non invites
let your voice and eyes reveal
move on-else i dial 911

ingratiating
by way of staring invites
be very wary

have wise eyes
understanding words
listen heed see all

© Mick E Talbot 2017/66


Image: Author Unknown

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7 thoughts on “Eyes plus words”

  1. Loved it. I wonder how long you took to come up with all of these.
    “if looks could kill, i have died many times,undeserved”- brilliant.
    “love talks bodily, blinded by touch no words, feelings of desire”- May be I understood it wrong. Doesn’t it sound more like lust?
    “take care non invites, let your voice and eyes reveal, move on-else i dial 911”-Ha Ha!
    Enjoyed this post!

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    1. A haiku reply. Thanks for dropping by, so pleased you enjoyed my post.

      can the two be split
      may be somewhere in between
      lust or desire

      desire planed
      perhaps a future family
      spontaneous lust

      confusion
      listen to body
      language

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