Haiku Senryu Comment

Haiku, senryu comment.
~~~~~~~~~~~
simply green
If truth be known
it breaths for us
~~~
we breath for it
now surplus well nearly
hence all the fuss
~~~
carbon dioxide
we wouldn’t survive one gasp
important is green
~~~
keeping the air clean
the way it was still should be
like your greens all do
~~~
dependant on you
your nurturing loving care
thanks for the fresh air
~~~
© Mick E Talbot 2017/66
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