Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 28 – LAUGH & CRY – Tanka

laugh with nature

springtime full of surprises

cry happiness

tears splash enticing life

cry for continuity

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Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 28 – LAUGH & CRY – Tanka

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19 thoughts on “Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 28 – LAUGH & CRY – Tanka”

  1. I love the line, “tears splash enticing life” — that really touches me somehow. If I may borrow it for a future poem, I would give you full proper credit and link 🙂 Unless you’d prefer I not “borrow”–you can tell me, I’ll respect your wishes.

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    1. R.l.,
      (Hope you don’t mind me calling you R.L.). Of course you can use it, with, as you said, “Giving me full credit”, and if I am still around I would love to read the poem. Go for it!

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      1. Yes, please do call me RL 🙂 Thank you for your permission….but what do you mean, “if you’re still around”–are you going away? I hope not–we need you here 🙂 Thanks again–I’ll work on a poem when I get a spare moment from all the April prompts!!

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          1. Oh my goodness, I had no idea! Nor did I realize you’re 73–I will turn 65 in September, and my health is mercurial, so I understand that we have no guarantees of tomorrow. I will work on the poem for you soon 🙂 Take good care of you–and I’ll keep you and your lovely wife in my prayers.

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