The Suns Night Eye 3 Senryu & A Tanka

Inspired by and Dedicated to yi ching lin
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you loved him
unrequited love
he loves you not
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should love grow cold
do wait until its freezing
thaw then flush it
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my first love
a stable lass–was always
then she galloped off
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moon the suns night eye
secret not at all known
now you do you know
in passing divulged your woe
the sun now your guiding light

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© Mick E Talbot 2017/66

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14 thoughts on “The Suns Night Eye 3 Senryu & A Tanka”

      1. Hmm…many blogger are doing this…and I couldn’t find relevant info on this Haibun…except Haiku with Prose…going to address this issue in a post am writing on Haiku–second part to the one I had wrote few weeks ago…

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