UNEXPECTED
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butterflies… gatekeepers in the thousands
once an early morning summer surprise
creeping thistles up high on the river bank
they themselves smothered with the butterflies
small gatekeepers, oh yes… in the thousands
the river ripples… a light breeze formed
so refreshing for us ancient ramblers
ramble on we did, to skylark’s serenades
a yellowhammer crossed our path… delighted
we sat in hope and indeed our hope, realised
the yellow hammer singing, we joined in with
a little bit a bread and no cheese… delightful
walking on a flock of mallard ducks did us follow
expecting to be fed grain or bread… unlucky
for dined had we on cheese, bread, and a cuppa
sat comfortably beneath a broad shady sallow
the sweet smelling cow cropped grass our table
the breeze had dropped, the river clear as glass.
peruse we did with hope, and much expectation.
true to the goodness of the day we were rewarded.
bronze bream, a shoal of two score or more, elation
to top our day a grass snake basking… we smiled
then looked to sky, and thanked mother nature
for our day of wonderment and of the unexpected
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© Mick E Talbot 2017/66
These days you are writing long poems and am loving it Mick…
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Thank you Sangbad, more where that came from 😉
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😊 my pleasure…
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This is so very good, Mick.
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Thank you Precious Lady.
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Welcome, precious buddy.
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😉 On the confused bit, you added a comment as if the poetry was mine, yet all I dd was reblog ‘Prompted Poetry’ which I thought was amazing. You might not mean it that way, but that’s how it looks.
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🙈🙊🙊
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Whatever you do is amazing.
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Your making m blush ☺
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Enjoy your day.
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Brilliant, a little sad, but mostly ,happy, thank you… Yasmin
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Why sad, sweetie , yeah , it’s okay to feel sad sometimes but happiness should never be far behind. Be well, my friend.
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May good health be your partner for the rest of your life take care!
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Impressive vocabulary and imagery!
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Many thanks Reena, appreciated
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