A Senryu Complement and a Human Haiku


 tears on her face
no… glitter… she thought disgraced…
her… thoughts misplaced


indeed you succeed
your efforts now transcribed
reaching out to all
the cruelty…pain…
to climb from the depths of hell
well told… your story
all emotions… yours
once locked away… you set free
you lit the darkness
like a candles flicker
shadows dance across your page
blind to their splendour
your words exposing
sadness that reverts to joy
a poets privilege
take care
my new acquaintance
write on

© Mick E Talbot 2017/66

A reply/comment to/on Akash Singh


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