A Senryu Complement and a Human Haiku

HAIKU

 tears on her face
no… glitter… she thought disgraced…
her… thoughts misplaced
~~~

SENRYU

indeed you succeed
your efforts now transcribed
reaching out to all
~
the cruelty…pain…
to climb from the depths of hell
well told… your story
~
all emotions… yours
once locked away… you set free
you lit the darkness
~
like a candles flicker
shadows dance across your page
blind to their splendour
~
your words exposing
sadness that reverts to joy
a poets privilege
~
take care
my new acquaintance
write on
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

© Mick E Talbot 2017/66

A reply/comment to/on Akash Singh

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