HAIKU – SENRYU – HAIKU SANDWICH

Inspired by Jules Paige

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A HAIKUSENRYUHAIKU REPLY

fresh distant water
from the planets depths… hot springs
rock carving masters
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not an acrostic
like you wrote for me…. pleasured
your talent exposed
~
on the same topic
fresh and marine…. endangered
polluted… obscene

All © Mick E Talbot 2017/66

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5 thoughts on “HAIKU – SENRYU – HAIKU SANDWICH”

    1. Thank Ina,
      Did you notice, I dropped an h off sandwich, and I know al about dropping h’es, like
      in artfordshire, erfordshire and ampshire urricanes ardly, ever appen, but dropping an ell, that’s a different story

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