NATURE TALKS
Sitting down, on a moor top tor, resting.
Meditating, as the moon waves the sun goodbye.
I stare into the abyss, of space, meditating.
Clouds rush in, black as night, storm clouds.
Wind, now howls, breaking the spell, noisy wind!
Nature talks, gives me warning, thanks, nature.
Southwesterly wind, not cold, but driving.
At my back, lightening step, thanks, southwesterly.
Home, I have reached my cave, my sweet home.
Sleep beckons, sand fills my eyes,
the Sandman’s parting gift, sleep has me.
© Mick Talbot 2017
The color coding:
RED: The repeated words in epanalepsis don’t have to be identical, but must be in context.
BLUE: Epanalepsis can occur across two sentences.
GREEN: The same word used at the beginning, and end of a sentence.
MAUVE: Epanalepsis can occur within a clause of a sentence.
Micks short form poetry challenge #6
Citation
Lambert-Sluder, Rose. “Epanalepsis.” LitCharts. LitCharts LLC, 17 May 2017. Web. 22 Oct 2017.
My deepest heartfelt thanks to the above for her very informative web page on the definition of Epanalepsis. Its help in my invention of Epanalepsis poetry has indeed been of great assistance, again many thanks. I hasten to add that all my writing are shared on WORDPRESS and other sites/blogs free gratis and will remain that way, and their copyright to me, for some time to come.
Mick Talbot Oct 23 2017
I like that form of poetry, but don’t know I can get my head around it to write it, will think about it.
Have a nice week.
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WHAT!A poet of your calibre, you would smash it at your first time of trying! 🙂 You have a nice week too Elsie!
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I should do, but my heads not thinking very well. but I will try.
Thanks for the nice comment.
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Hey credits due where credits due, and your most welcome! Please give me a heads up if and when.
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I’ll be there in a sec thanks Elsie.
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I had a go, enjoyed it, Tell me if there is something wrong, will try harder next time.
https://ramblingsofawriter2016.com/2017/10/23/landscape-epanalepsis-poem/
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Absolutely nothing wrong, more please!
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Hi Mick, saw your new form at Elsie’s Ramblings so I took the challenge:
https://madhatterpoetry.com/2017/10/23/grandmutter-clutter/
(Question: must I add more lines of GREEN pattern or is this acceptable?)
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Replied on site, but in answer to your question; the only restraint is it must follow the colour coded guidelines as random as you like. A challenge for us and all who are interested. A tanka epanalepsis, or any form that will take to the epanalepsis treatment, syllable counts included. You up for that?
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I’ll think about that…tanka, Mick 😉
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Haha thanks Lynn 🙂
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