Mick’s Short Form Poetry Challenge
Perpetuating
the
Rare Short Form Poetry Styles
Prompt: ‘time and trial‘
Should you wish to skip the intro and go directly to the poetry types please click here
Introduction:
Firstly; thanks to all who participated in the original Elfje challenge, it was a bit of a slow start, but we were getting there. However, a suggestion made by Jules Paige that I change the format to a multi one based on short forms of poetry, I thought a great idea, and for which I thank her, most gratefully. Here then are the forms, if they are new to you please click on the one that takes your interest for its guidelines, thank you. Some of them can be likened to rare breeds, and as the saying goes, “Use them or lose them”. It might be that some of them were totally unknown to you, there were to me. So, I think by broadening the scope of the challenge it will perpetuate some of the rarer forms, and hopefully encourage new inventions too, the door is open to all. New short forms will be added as and when they are brought to my attention. Note some of the prompt words, (as presented), might be found to not fit in with some of the forms, but don’t forget yer synonyms. Hope you enjoy this new challenge, and if anyone has any ideas on improving it don’t forget the comment box, I’m all eyes! Prompt for this week, ‘time‘, renewed every Saturday/Sunday sometime after midnight London time. Suggestings, advice, all welcome, please use the comment box, thank you.
Please note more forms added, thank you, and I will be adding examples under all.
There has to be some rules, but before I get to them, all participants can submit as many entries as they wish; now the rules:
Some Helpful Links:
Jules Paige POETRY FORMS OLD AND NEW
mindlovemiserysmenagerie: Glossary of forms, poetic terminology and literary devices
Shadow Poetry – Poetry Types
Poetry Forms: Please click on the poetry form names for more detailed information, thank you.
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- Alphabet Haiku
Example:
the toad talking toad
thundered… threatening terror
taking territory
© Mick E Talbot 2017 - Atom
Example:
love
yourself
better
© Mick E Talbot 2017 - Collom Lune
Example:
Word count 3,5,3
EXTINCTION
mother natures laws
don’t break them… or pay
no fines… extinction
© Mick E Talbot 2017 - Elfje
Example:
love
breaks hearts
truelove makes babies
new generations the future
awaits - Epanalepsis
Example: The epanalepsis being highlighted in blue. The asterisked explained preceding the poem.
Fly like a bird,* aeroplanes fly like an eagle. ****
Sleep on the wing,** swifts sleep on the wing.**
Fly** like a kite not tied to a string, fly** free.
Hot air thermals*** aid all manner of flyers like
Pilots of gliders who seek out hot air thermals.***
Wind assisted paper can fly like a bird.***
© Mick E Talbot 2017* Across the stanza.
** Identical start and end.
*** Across 2 sentences.
**** In context. - Haiku
Example:
winter close… lurking
fall winds humming tunes… leaves dance
hedgehogs hibernate
© Mick E Talbot 2017 - Kelly Lune
Example:
Syllable 5, 3, 5
EXTINCTION
mother natures laws
don’t break them…
no fines… extinction
© Mick E Talbot 2017 - Kyrielle
- Kyrielle Sonnet
- Lanturne
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Mcwhirtle
FAILINGS OF LEADERS
The failings of leaders
Not taking into account
The needs of the people
Apart from their very ownThey live in splendour
With steaks for dinner
Soft pillows to rest on
The people, skin and bone
© Mick E Talbot 2017/66 - Monoku
- Monorhyme
- Müki
- OctaTimbre
10 line stanza 8 syllables per line.
Example:
OCTOBER PEAKING
autumn said adieu to summer.
mist and winds, days growing longer.
leaves, now eye candy, all changing.
floating, gliding, dancing, drifting,
shuffling, kicked up, flurrying sounds.
squirrels burying, acorns found,
insulating, adding colour
to newly built dreys, keeping warm.
planning ahead, against winter
appearing fresh on spring-like days
© Mick E Talbot 2017 - pi ku
(1/2 of a tau ku): 3,1,4
Example:
dead red fox…
ragged…
found on the road
© Mick E Talbot 2017 - Septolet
Example:
Geese,
Gaggling, one calls,
Migration starts,
Instinctively driven.
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Warmer
Climes, for a
Warmer winter.
© Mick E Talbot 2017 - Snowball
Example:
WRITE
write
poetry
inspire
aspiring
composers
vigilantly
remodelling
titillations
tantalisingly
quintessential
© Mick E Talbot 2017/66 - Tanka
- tau ku
Example:
fresh on the road… blood
dead fox…
run over… no… hunted by hounds© Mick E Talbot 2017 - Tetractys
An example of a double:
WHY NUCLEAR?
why
nuclear
power is
a threat to all
its radioactive contamination
it has a half-life of one hundred years
unviable
habitat
barren
dead
© Mick E Talbot 2017 - The American 767
Must contain the name of a bug, (creepy crawly).
Example:
PAINTED LADIES
butterflies… many species
painted ladies… so fresh
once abundant… now threatened
© Mick E Talbot 2017 - Tilius
turned yellow… orange… red
autumn tree’sbared
© Mick E Talbot 2017/66 - Triolet
- W5
Roundup, Mick’s Short Form Poetry Challenge #5:
Reena: In honour of October, an OctaTimbre, thanks Reena I am hoping the link will take all back to the poem you left on the challenge page, however, it will take you to the page where you might have to scroll to find it.
https://mickhispoetry.wordpress.com/2017/10/14/micks-short-form-poetry-challenge-5-perpetuating-the-rare-forms-oct-21st-2017-prompt-love/#comment-6235#reeLinda: A beautiful, raunchy triolet poem, thank you Linda.
My LoveVivian: A beautiful tau ku, as you know Vivian, it inspired me to write this, thank you.
Love is…..Jules: A septolet dedicated to marriage, her marriage, very meaningful. Thanks Jules.
https://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2017/10/16/s-mick-5-what-you-do-to-me-10-16/Footnote:
If I haven’t thanked anyone in the roundup I thank you all now, and humbly ask for your continued support. Please keep spreading the word, best wishes to all 🙂 Please accept my apology for being overdue with this weeks challenge.
Mick - Alphabet Haiku
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I’ve got a haiku series working.
Hopefully I’ll get to posting it tomorrow. 🙂
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Bring it on, thanks for the heads up Jules. 🙂
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Hmm… It’s 4.15 am, so I’m a bit bleary, but I couldn’t resist this challenge, now I’ve finally found it. My offering is a Fibonacci form – I believe you said that we’re not limited to forms on your list…
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HI, wonderful person, yeah you go for it, I’ll add it to the list. I’ll have a go myself, not a format I tried, we’ll see? Take care Jane, have a great week, Mick
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Actual I have, however they don’t seem to conform to the format will be checking them out at a later date.
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Yes! Go for it, Mick! I’m off the air soon – too exhausted to feel elated after writing today’s happy (though possibly dull) post. You too – hope you have a fantastic week doing whatever you do, doo doo doopy doo…
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Did it, nowt to do doo doo doopy doo now, have a good un Jane.
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Do you know that your last messages have some kind of polldaddy html gobbledigook on them.. am I making sense? After fifteen hours solid writing following about three hours sleep I’m too tired to know… g’night… ow… head hit the deck…
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Re the pollldaddy, snap
https://polldaddy.com/js/rating/rating.jsDo you know that your last messages have some kind of polldaddy html gobbledigook on them.. am I making sense? After fifteen hours solid writing following about three hours sleep I’m too tired to know… g’night… ow… head hit the deck…
Something WP is up to so I am led to believe?
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Ah… These things happen.
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Spread the word, you can reblog if you wish, thank you for showing your enthusiasm, yay! Mick the challenge host 🙂
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Watch
Time rob
the essence of
all trials and tribulations
Life
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Some truth in that, great elfje Reena, thank you for sharing 🙂
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haiku series:
Memory in a Glass Dome
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Replied I’m sure?
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Done and dusted. Thanks again Jules
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And just because it also, with a little stretching fits the theme (a word Fib and reverse word Fib:
Sly Heroics?
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See/read my comment on your page, With my bad eyesight thought it read Sky Heroics. Put my glasses on to read your Fibs couldn’t make the connection then (with my glasses on) noted that it was Sly Heroics, not a fib honest. Thanks for the double entry!
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Hello Mick- Another trial- I have grown quite fond of the form. Have a lovely week. https://charmedchaos.com/2017/10/23/bewitching-hour/
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OOPS! Darn spell check- make that a Triolet!
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I think I’ve made the same mistake, ooops, hey ho….
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Haha! 🙂
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Replied, I’m sure, perfect triolet 🙂
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